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2008年高考英語應對策略與基礎寫作指導
第一講 記敘文：如何寫人一、寫作指導
高考英語基礎寫作中的寫人側(cè)重人物的介紹，可以用第一人稱(如寫求職信)，也可以用第三人稱，時態(tài)常常用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，具體的人稱和時態(tài)要依據(jù)寫作的要求來確定。寫作過程中要注意以下幾個方面的問題：
1．人物寫作通常需要介紹人物的姓名、年齡、外貌、學歷、經(jīng)歷、專業(yè)、愛好、特長、事跡、性格等多個方面，但英語基礎寫作需要嚴格按照寫作要求來寫，包括所給的全部信息點，既不能遺漏，也不能隨意添加。
2．對題目所給的信息要進行適當重組，安排好寫作順序，突出重點信息。重點信息通常是寫作的目的所在，比如求職要重點突出學歷、經(jīng)歷，新聞報道要重點突出事跡，介紹自己的老師、朋友要突出他們的特點，等等。
3．正確運用描寫人物的詞匯和句型。
4．注意運用正確的時態(tài)。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現(xiàn)在時，而描寫人物的出生、教育背景、經(jīng)歷、事跡常用一般過去時。
二、常用詞語
外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking， pretty，short，strong, tall， thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, etc.
性格特點：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talkative， warm-hearted，wise，etc.
出生年齡：a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.
興趣愛好：be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.
教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in class，when at college, etc.
經(jīng)歷事跡： become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’s life for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to do sth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.
他人評價：an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.
三、實例分析
【例1】 李華自我介紹
假設你是李華，申請到一家外資企業(yè)工作，你需要用英文給人事部經(jīng)理寫一封信，介紹自己的基本情況，簡介信包括下表所列內(nèi)容：
姓名 李華 出生年月 1981年8月
出生地 廣東省佛山市
學歷 1994—2000 佛山第一中學
2000—2004 廣州大學計算機系
2004—至今 在一家計算機公司工作
所學主要課程 計算機、中文、數(shù)學、英語、體育
特長愛好 游泳（曾獲得過大學游泳比賽一等獎），音樂
寫作要求：
1． 簡介必須包括以上全部內(nèi)容（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好）；
2． 使用5個句子。
Dear Manager,
I am waiting for your reply.
Thank you.
Yours Truly,
Li Hua
寫作指導：
文體 記敘文，用第一人稱
信息組織 ①寫信目的，到貴公司工作；②姓名、出生地點、日期； ③學習簡歷；④學習內(nèi)容，現(xiàn)在情況；⑤愛好和特長
時態(tài) 現(xiàn)在進行時，一般過去時
參考范文：
Dear Manager,
I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years. I studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E, and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.
I am waiting for your reply.
Thank you.
Yours Truly,
Li Hua
【例 2】介紹姚明和劉翔
假設你是李華，正在美國參加學習，課堂上老師要求你簡要介紹我國的名人，你選擇了姚明和劉翔，兩位體育明星，他們的基本情況如下：
姓名 姚明 劉翔
出生 1980年，上海 1983年，上海
事跡 世界著名籃球運動員，現(xiàn)在美國NBA火箭隊效力，球隊主力隊員之一，多次進入美國全明星隊。 多次獲得世界110米欄冠軍，2004年雅典奧運會冠軍，不久以后還打破了世界記錄。
愛好 聽流行音樂 音樂，唱歌
寫作要求：
1． 簡介必須包括以上全部內(nèi)容（開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好）；
2． 使用5個句子。
3． 參考詞匯：火箭隊 Rocket， 110米欄110-metre hurdling，雅典奧運會——the Athens Olympic Games
Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.
____________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
寫作指導：
文體 記敘文，用第三人稱
信息組織 有兩條線索：一是分別對比兩人的各項情況，二是先介紹姚明，再介紹劉翔。第二條線索比較好。
①姚明，籃球運動員，出生；②主力隊員，明星隊； ③劉翔，110米欄世界冠軍；④04雅典冠軍，打破記錄；⑤兩人的愛好。
時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時
參考例文：
Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music whilst Liu Xiang likes singing.
四、即時練習
1. 介紹同學
假設你是李華，學校網(wǎng)站英文版通訊員，最近學校網(wǎng)站準備宣傳一些優(yōu)秀學生，請你用英文為李敏同學寫一篇簡介，李敏同學的基本情況如下：
姓名 李敏 職務 高二（1）班班長
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